Okay, quick example.
Telling: Pete's neighbors were very helpful.
Showing: Pete's neighbors would bring the mail up for him some days. John would mow the lawn for Pete some weeks and plow the driveway in the winter. And Mary would often bring over soup or dessert when she made too much.
Is the list really better? Or should those examples be spread out to avoid the list.
Opinions welcome.
Telling: Pete's neighbors were very helpful.
Showing: Pete's neighbors would bring the mail up for him some days. John would mow the lawn for Pete some weeks and plow the driveway in the winter. And Mary would often bring over soup or dessert when she made too much.
Is the list really better? Or should those examples be spread out to avoid the list.
Opinions welcome.
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