I'm working on a story right now that uses a lot of ellipses in dialogue to indicate tension and trouble. And I'm not 100% certain how to handle the punctuation. Here's how I currently have it:
"Hey, where are you..."
"I can't talk! The monster is here!..."
"Wait, wait, where are..."
"It's almost upon us..."
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You will notice in the above that I have no period at the end of the dialogue pieces. Should I place one there such that they become this:
"Hey, where are you...".
"I can't talk! The monster is here!...".
"Wait, wait, where are...".
"It's almost upon us...".
***
I have seen it done both ways, so I was wondering what the experts in the group do for their manuscript submissions. Thanks.
"Hey, where are you..."
"I can't talk! The monster is here!..."
"Wait, wait, where are..."
"It's almost upon us..."
***
You will notice in the above that I have no period at the end of the dialogue pieces. Should I place one there such that they become this:
"Hey, where are you...".
"I can't talk! The monster is here!...".
"Wait, wait, where are...".
"It's almost upon us...".
***
I have seen it done both ways, so I was wondering what the experts in the group do for their manuscript submissions. Thanks.
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