Started Muse by James Renner last night. Cemetery Dance is generally very good at proof reading before publication. This one appears to be the exception. It starts with what I believe is an editing error. A private investigator is offered a job and told he will be paid $20,000. Literally in the same paragraph he is told they will pay him $3,000. That distracted me as I was trying to figure out what the $20,000 was for if they were paying him $3,000. In the first 25 pages there have been several typos as well. I generally notice typos but am able to quickly put them behind me. There are enough in the first 25 pages of the story to take me out of the story as I think about the typos including one where a word was used that does not make sense in the context it was used. I actually had to look that one up to see if it had a meaning I was unaware of. It did not and I really do not know what the sentence meant to say. The story has potential as long as the typo issues stop and I can get into the story without distractions.
Day two of reading this had no typos and I am really getting into the story.
Day two of reading this had no typos and I am really getting into the story.
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