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    Hardcore Kelli

    I just got the email about this one, and I think it needs more proofreading.

    "hurtled" should be hurdled, and Ford would take issue with Pontiac claiming Thunderbird as one of their own.

    "Katy hurtled the rusting skeleton of an old '77 Pontiac Thunderbird like an Olympic gymnast."

    #2
    Ha, good catches. I'm pretty sure the sales copy was pulled from the author's first draft manuscript, and we completely missed those when assembling the product page, so I'll double-check with the designer and make sure one of the proofreaders noted them for the actual book. Thanks for the heads-up!

    Brian
    Brian James Freeman

    Lividian Publications: http://www.Lividian.com
    My Writing: http://www.BrianJamesFreeman.com

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      #3
      Did he also change the name of the main character from Katy to Kelli?

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        #4
        Love the cover for this one. Wish it was getting a hardcover release as I don't really do paperbacks anymore. Hopefully it will get a hardcover edition up the road.

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          #5
          Originally posted by joejets View Post
          Did he also change the name of the main character from Katy to Kelli?
          Nope.
          Brian James Freeman

          Lividian Publications: http://www.Lividian.com
          My Writing: http://www.BrianJamesFreeman.com

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            #6
            Originally posted by sholloman81 View Post
            Love the cover for this one. Wish it was getting a hardcover release as I don't really do paperbacks anymore. Hopefully it will get a hardcover edition up the road.
            There will be a hardcover down the road.
            Brian James Freeman

            Lividian Publications: http://www.Lividian.com
            My Writing: http://www.BrianJamesFreeman.com

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              #7
              Originally posted by Brian James Freeman View Post
              Ha, good catches. I'm pretty sure the sales copy was pulled from the author's first draft manuscript, and we completely missed those when assembling the product page, so I'll double-check with the designer and make sure one of the proofreaders noted them for the actual book. Thanks for the heads-up!

              Brian
              You're welcome! I see so many typos these days, usually because spell check only cares that the word is spelled correctly, but doesn't care that you used the wrong word

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                #8
                Same. I don't buy PB's anymore because they hurt my hands to hold them and, depends on the PB, the print can be hard to see.

                Originally posted by sholloman81 View Post
                Love the cover for this one. Wish it was getting a hardcover release as I don't really do paperbacks anymore. Hopefully it will get a hardcover edition up the road.
                Looking for the fonting of youth.

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                  #9
                  This sounds fun and White is always an interesting read

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                    #10
                    I should have said that as well. Sounds like a fun story!

                    Originally posted by bookworm 1 View Post
                    This sounds fun and White is always an interesting read
                    Looking for the fonting of youth.

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