Correct. But I just read right through that mess. It is odd that anyone would inject that stuff into the narrative when it seems not to have purpose towards the story. The thing that bugs me more than that is the use of dialectical sayings/phrases and obscure words. The negative in this is that it takes me out of the story for a few beats while my brain processes these things.

The one good thing I can say about using odd words is that it forces me to expand my vocabulary.

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SLEEPING BEAUTIES, too, apparently.